looking for creative help

[robert843]

So I want to make a sticker for the boat below is what I have thrown together but I just don't like something about it not sure if its the layout or the way its worded. Any one with a little more creativity out there got any ideas?

 

[Bluewater272]

The text below the line should be centered, not left justified.

 

[MidnightRider]

Yeah agree, center align the last two lines and personally I'd get rid of the word 'then', makes it feel too wordy.

 

[robert843]

Is the warning sticker to much or should I just go with the normal barefoot sticker kind of thing

 

[bronze_10]

Yeah agree, center align the last two lines and personally I'd get rid of the word 'then', makes it feel too wordy.

I agree.. "Then" makes it sound funny..

But u do you @robert843... Make that sticker.. . be bold!

 

[Bluewater272]

It's your boat, if you like it go for it. I'd go the direction of the barefoot one, personally. Pretty sure no one actually reads warning stickers, I sure don't.

 

[MidnightRider]

Here is a different take on the wording to stir the pot and keep your creative juices flowing, but these guys got it right - your boat, if you like it, to hell what others think.

 

[haknslash]

Whipped this up if you want something a little more simple. I hate orange too so yea couldn't use it

 

[haknslash]

Here's another....

 

[zipper]

FWIW, just adding a couple of ideas...I like the warning tag on top, but if it said stop and was red it might get more attention. And replace the triangle with an octagon with a barefoot symbol in it. I like @ttzz wording. Although @haknslash has posted some good text also.

 

[haknslash]

Roughly thrown together but here's one for laughs

BTW I can make these in vector format if anyone wants something designed in the future to be printed out by a company. These are just low res for online posting.

 

[swatski]

I like the "NO SHOES BEYOND THIS POINT" warning.
I always find the "naked feet" stickers to be a bit confusing.
(no, not what you are thinking - not in a risque sense, I just don't mind if feet are actually "naked" or with socks on, socks are fine)

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[robert843]

All great ideas I know its my boat but it just didn't feel right that's why I figured I would get you ideas I hate the orange color as well.

 

[bronze_10]

Put these two on your boat,

 

[robert843]

Whipped this up if you want something a little more simple. I hate orange too so yea couldn't use it

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@haknslash where did you pull this one from?

 

[haknslash]

@haknslash where did you pull this one from?

I made it. Nameplate and label graphic design is one of the many hats I wear at work. If you want it I can give you a vector file so that it can be sent to a label manufacturer. Just tell me the size you want it.

 

[AZ Native]

@haknslash You have skills. The talent on this forum never ceases to amaze.